you gonna start it

derrdas last post was fake as hell nice bitting ya lame bitch

http://my16bars.com/bar/58168/READ-MY-SHIT!.html

yours wasnt even off the head

nah his was copy and paste off google

why would I start it if you want your verse heard? Iol wtf

check the entry name asshole. Its my rap. ive submitted a bunch of shit tryen to get heard. contact mikey at 16 bars bro thas my shit so dont hate

okay prepare for the feelin

when my lyrics are revealin

im lookin up to the cielin

the eds got me odeyinn

im thinkin what have i done with my life?

i wish at the time i never picked up the fuckin knife

coz now i cant think right

and ill never feel aightt

so any mother fucker wanna try diss me?

im the biggest phsico as you can probly see

if you get me mad my barz will leave chewin on peggss

like as if you seen a pic of a arcrobat with no legs

i wanna be spittin with the starz

takin holidays to marz

crusin in fast cars

raidin up the sparr

but no im in a life inprisonmeant

i held a knife to myself thinkin of insitionmeant

but then i found somethin to get me through this ting

spittin barz is what could earn me some bling

soon as i escape from this place

ill start soarin ahead of the world in this race

ima blow this forum up with lyrics if i get merked

this is just a warmup i aint even been perked....

coolest kid is in this shyt ya niggas aint gonna like meh 1 bit

gonna be all hating but i don't five a fuck if im gonna win without luck

cuz im twisted like a blunt keep ur ur mouth sut u lil cunt

cuz imm coming ^ fast like a jet with an ignition im the best there's no competition

ppl wanna be like meh ,s im so fresh like a mint in ur breath

like im from Antarctica cuz im cooler den ice don't think so, im gonna do some slice and dice

ryhmes gonna make u faint if rap was a religion ill b a fucking saint

im out

it sounds shit readin it but if you could HEAR the flow it would sound alot better to you lmao

so is it not legal to be in this competition and have submitted my spit to other forums?