Umm... was this supposed to be battle style, or did I just make myself look like a dumbass?

lol nah ur shit was pretty good bro and im new to this freestyle stuff , whats battle style ??

When the rap is like it was part of a battle... lol. Basically, you're not rapping to rap, you're rapping at a specific person. But you knew what a battle was... right?

Thanks, but after I read through it twice, I realized that I messed up a couple of times. I actually had to go back to fill a word in when i edited.

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ohh yea i got what you mean , and yea i know what battle is , but this was just a session so we can go in and say whatever you can talk shit dont gotta be directed to anyone specific

Im the nicest with spits, devices i grip, will squeeze the life out ya limbs/

call em "vice grips"//, im nice bitch, catch a knife to the ribs/

to seperate ya organs like a hyphen to scripts/

im nice wit my fists, even nicer wit clips//

the nine will numb ya whole area like vicodin pills/

keepin it real? u'll likely get killed//, E leave u snuffed wit a gage/

tils sheets coverin ya face like Muslim babes/

got more terror hidin in me than Afghan caves//

I got Afghan ways, but i dont pray to Allah/

i'll make u kneel n face the east, on ya way to Gihad//

and u can say that u hard; jump stupid, i wont even flinch/

while u scared, pupils look like u been chillin in an opium den//

im on a poetry benge, scorin dope like a fiend/

i got a scope n a beam, so when i put crosses on ya chest know it aint no rosary beads//

aint no hoes on my team, and i dont joke when i speak/

so if im pokin fun at ya ass u'll prolly have a hole in ya spleen//

Can someone start up a battle? I realize that hardly anyone on here knows each other, but we have a way of battling at my college, where you write down a list of stuff about yourself (the more you write, the more the other person has to work with, but if you give a whole lot of information and win, you get mad reputation).

Oh, and e_town, that last line was funny as hell.

oh god why am i doin this.. killin_em_all ur killin me.. haha

killin_em_all man i cant do raps like you

there too fukin good to be true

our lives aint so much different from wot ive heard

but u prob jus think im a stupid bird

i talk alot maybe too much but hey thats me

oiii wen u comin over for that cuppa tea?

told ya the boyfriend wud get bored n sleep

uve seen his hair aint ya, dont he look like a sheep ( )

u gotta come here and drink them spirits

u know me i aint afraid to go near it

all i know is ur one good friend

one of them ones to keep till the end

had loads of laughs and many more on the way

think of the good times it will all be okay

we both did shit we aint proud of

but all we can do now is show the love

it all works out fine if u jus carry on

wha wud they feel if we was gone

we can battle when someone gets they shit on video. . .

*claps* Not bad Holz!

lol cheers girl only started yesterday haha