Check out this sweet produced track i made for intrumental for my upcoming track lists, all these are my first produced beats. So stay tuned for lyricial tracks  Slamin beats right here. So comment keep em comin. nothing wrong wit some feedback. Check out my beats!

well we all start with something. it's missing a lot.

thanks yo. i know what u mean its missing alot of sounds. even melody. that was my tough part getting good melody. i like th ehard bass effects, i like bass its important to get those thumping sounds you heard!

yeah...you got the rhythm and bass down, it just seemed to be all over the place for a second. i dont know if you do or not, but try rapping over it. good rule of thumb, if you can, anybody can.

Yeah your absolutely right. I notice that too in at least a phew parts its all over the place, i cud come up with better playlist and keep adding to it, then get lyrics going. ill figure it out. i got some time to get at it. What kinda music do u prefer to listen too?

yeah, i do that all the time. if you can't catch the beat yourself, no one will be able to. I'm a music lover, i listen to all types of things and incorporate it into hip hop.

I really appreate the feedback and the heads up there. I know now how important it is to monitor ur peice before u release the track for anything missing that go off beat or something, but i am still learning i got bunch more tutorial videos, gonna go back to the basement get busy on some new shit. Do you listen to the Dubstep? i just found out what that actually is lol, didn;t know it was just a music genre, thawt it was .....something else. What programs r u familar with? reason ? fruityloops?