aight, i can definitely tell youre just starting.. but thats not such a bad thing.. you seem to have a pretty good grasp on the concept of breakdowns and changeups.. and even down to what all percussion and shit should be in a beat ... just your instrument selection sucks... as u continue to do this youll find some better drums too... u got a kinda 808 kick with a hihop snare.. it dont really mesh well in this Thuggin in the Night joint... but seek out some sound kits to up your drum game and itll throw your beats up a notch or two just off that alone...

i can pretty much hear whats in this though and tell you made it in fruityloops. thats not a bad thing.. .you just need better instruments... if youre using FL studio like i think you are... then seek out some VST's youll be able to use them within the piano roll... theyve got tons of sounds in them... just google that shit and read up on it.. its worth it.

as far as this song goes.. its doodie! but thats again probably because youre just starting... if you really intend on recording music.. invest in some better equipment than a radio shack mic rubber banded to some shit... get a real mic for about 200.. a real mic stand.. a preamp and all that other shit... once your sound quality isnt shitty you can focus on how to improve your flow and all of that, but even which a great song if the sound quality is like yours is.. nobody will pay attention..

if any of this sounds mean in any way, my bad, please take it with a grain of salt... im a serious artist and producer...

at some point youre going to need to hear this.... better now than later.

why do u have a pet pigeon?

did u forget bout your other account as well splizzah u donk?

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Oh yeah wow ur right tho, I am using a mic thats attached with string to a telescope stand!

i didn;t buy it at radioshack tho, 200dolla mic eh? damn thats expensive.

i bought mine at a pawn shop for 20 bux.

Yeh im just starting to produce music ur right again

i always written shit tho , im a writor more then a producer thats for sure. I make my beats quickly, Research is key i know, thats why gonna learn to produce music, its a struggle actually learnin this shit, since i been learning it every day for about a year now....still havn;t got the riight touch that iwant with the music u know? but thanks ur comments means alot

i know honesty great tool, and i appreate your honesty friend, Peace

i was always jus down to freestyle neva liked to write much but when i did it was fiya but would rather record a freestyle then sum writtin shit i like them raw spits

yeh its always better when it comes liver eh KidChronic. I enjoy freestylin! i gotta admit tho....i ant the best freestyler, but i enjoy doin it, i enjoy listening to my friends freestyle too, I keep tryin to spit some shit out, just sometimes i wanna keep goin wit the freestyle....i wanna keep practicin freestyle...maybe i can make enough beats i can practice freestylin on my own beats uknow?....i feel like i want to do everythin for myself, i even make websites too,i got one brewing up for APB,check my new forum post gona show u guys what APB is

Just keep going with it! Its cool to have a passion in life. I havent found mine yet and i think playing games aint gonna cut it. I have an idea for a short story about an evil demonic cat but it will take some skill to keep it from being cheesy X'D.

yea its not that i cant write i choose not to n it pisses my homies off id rather just hop on the mic n freestyle i personally think i sound betta when i freestyle i smoke 2 much weed to remember some lyrics ive written lol keep it up n fuck the haterz do u dont be afraid to be different

Ay yo, Young Lord check that out and critique that lol. ;o

Yeah its a total doodie....K we talkin bout Thuggin in tha night right? i deleted that shit, ill make it better another time, like sheit i got so many beats, hard to tell if it sounded good u know? but i took a break, back at producing again. Making some really nice tunes, To go with some kinda albem, Gonna take some time, i put alot of effort into it, ill learn phew tricks, Thanks for advice lookin up VSTs actually in the process of that right now, research is going smooth, i got couple from a buddy, VST plug ins,

Anyone should look up on something they enjoy doing. Prehaps not enjoying at first but in the end if u gotta work on something u like, always in the end it shows amazing results. Just magine what these fine artists in the world think of, could magine how creative people can be on anything they put there mind too. At least if someone say could draw. they can make a nice picture to show,. Could be beuitful, cud be whatever. thats kinda like how artists song goes. Its whatever the artist intends the song should go as not for the song that the artist delivering, But its the picture in the artists mind that is delivering the song....

my Idol is Eminem i always magine what he really is feeling when he is singing/writting/rapping to his songs. and now yrs going by somebit . lil jon appeared i sorta had idolized him recently,. because of his melondy structure, i suggest anyone that wants to learn how to write melondies get ahold of lil jons beats

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