need to work on ur flow a bit

u rap

my flow

like wen u spittin... the words need to come together have a flow... not sound like u stuttering and shit... or that u reading off the paper. beats - also important... u gotta pick a good beat that fits ur song so that u flow goes with it. just pointing that shit out... only helps u get betta.

Word! when I used to rap back in the day it wasn't as easy as it is now. There was no beat making software or just rhyming over somebodies beat on youtube. You had to buy a single with an instrumental on the b-side. Take the rap you already wrote alter it to that beat and atleast have a mic to make the demo sound legit. With that being said dude you sound like its 1993 and you rapin weak ass bars into a box. And whats sad is you probably dont know what a box is ! But thats what this sounds like. The reverb and weak as flow in itself is killing you. Write, Remember , Spit. repeat then record.

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