u thnk i did good

no not at all and dont record shit wit ur shity comp mic u need alot of work be yaself stop tryin to sound like these lames u hear on the radio

tru shit put my real voice out tht bitch

woooooooooooooooooow

wow wat

i aint one to tlk negative bout a nigga art lol but fam like niggas sayin ya flow mad choppy u gotta be readin that straight off paper...like u wrote it then recorded right after cuz u was stumblin all over ya words....

.i wont comment on thequality cuz idk what setupur runnin with to record on....but it sounds like ur usin the computer mic...am i correct?

i didnt get past 44sec after fastforwarding the first 30 secs cuz the overall quality of the recording and the lack of effort on gettin ya flow together before recording ya song...

i did use the computer mic but the next 1 put up here its gnna be hard tht was a slow beat forreal

dont sweat negative comments ..u need em to get better ..keep doin ya thing

thnks cutiepie but wat u thnk dow

u need some work ...and they rite about the flow ..u gotta bring it 2getha better ...